Ottoman Camelry - ACCEPTED

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Re: Ottoman Akinji

Post by godOfKings » Thu Mar 22, 2018 10:55 am

The second image has great potential if u can fix the problems, and add a hand holding the spear and the spear blade should b below the camel's neck to b more pronounced, I could try if u want
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Re: Ottoman Akinji

Post by Ayush Tiwari » Fri Mar 23, 2018 2:44 am

That would be great if you could try(but still,I get more credit in image than you :) )
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Re: Ottoman Akinji

Post by godOfKings » Fri Mar 23, 2018 9:58 am

Here, how is this?


I m not good with transparent shades or shadows :(
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Re: Ottoman Akinji

Post by makazuwr32 » Fri Mar 23, 2018 11:30 am

looks good but maybe shade below needs to be brighter a bit.
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Re: Ottoman Akinji

Post by Ayush Tiwari » Fri Mar 23, 2018 1:01 pm

godOfKings wrote:Here, how is this?


I m not good with transparent shades or shadows :(
Glad to see,its nice,but I think that the new hand needs to be little muscular :)
And.....Camel's leg is looking little lame
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Re: Ottoman Akinji

Post by godOfKings » Fri Mar 23, 2018 3:52 pm

akinjitry.png
Now? Not sure how I can make camel's leg any better though


Also the original leg
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Re: Ottoman Akinji

Post by godOfKings » Fri Mar 23, 2018 4:29 pm

samuelch wrote:I made a mistake with the unit name. It's not Akinji. There is no historical name for the Ottoman light camels, so just name it Ottoman light camels?

I checked, may b name it ottoman camelry, also I saw roman camels called dromedarii, currently romans don't have any effective anti cavalry units, a camel auxiliary could b an interesting addition, may b we can later add a 3 turn costing camel rider that could spawn wen recruiting auxiliary, its stats would b better than this unit but it would spawn depending on luck
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Re: Ottoman Akinji

Post by Belfry777 » Fri Mar 23, 2018 6:05 pm

What hapend to his neck?
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Re: Ottoman Akinji

Post by godOfKings » Fri Mar 23, 2018 7:28 pm

He is wearing a full scarf covering his head, people in deserts don't have their heads exposed due to sand storms
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Re: Ottoman Akinji

Post by Belfry777 » Fri Mar 23, 2018 8:10 pm

He looks like an ape one a donkey! Lol :lol:
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Re: Ottoman Akinji

Post by godOfKings » Fri Mar 23, 2018 9:04 pm

Wen u replace pink colour with player colour like red or blue for example, u will no longer have any complain, but I edited the above pictures anyways

Aside from this, will u give Ur opinion on which camel leg is better? Personally I choose top pic because I want the camel to b different from mameluke camel, I hope u r not serious about it looking like a donkey because its the exact design of the mameluke's camel without any change except for the leg
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Re: Ottoman Akinji

Post by COOLguy » Sat Mar 24, 2018 12:50 am

AWESOME!!

I am accepting it. You can make small changes to things to make it better, just not huge changes :)

What is the name now?
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Re: Ottoman Akinji

Post by Belfry777 » Sat Mar 24, 2018 1:35 am

godOfKings wrote:Wen u replace pink colour with player colour like red or blue for example, u will no longer have any complain, but I edited the above pictures anyways

Aside from this, will u give Ur opinion on which camel leg is better? Personally I choose top pic because I want the camel to b different from mameluke camel, I hope u r not serious about it looking like a donkey because its the exact design of the mameluke's camel without any change except for the leg
Yes the top one looks a bit better to me. And yes to be different than the mamluck too.
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Re: Ottoman Akinji - ACCEPTED

Post by Ayush Tiwari » Sat Mar 24, 2018 3:51 am

Nice,I like the way you made the pike or spear whatever it is.
Edited:Thanks,fot your assistance Mak and GoK and CoolGuy and Belfry others also.Perhaps,this was the first topic of HoJ,which was accepted,hope for more in future.
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Re: Ottoman Akinji - ACCEPTED

Post by godOfKings » Sat Mar 24, 2018 7:33 am

Ottoman camelry

also I got an idea for a future roman auxiliary addition called dromedarii, I will make a separate post later after I make the image for that
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Re: Ottoman Akinji - ACCEPTED

Post by Belfry777 » Sat Mar 24, 2018 10:52 pm

cool! send it to the HOJ to get it implemented faster.
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Re: Ottoman Camelry - ACCEPTED

Post by godOfKings » Fri Apr 06, 2018 8:59 am

Don't know wat I m doing, but something felt odd like something was missing...


Edit: added a leather bag to second version
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Re: Ottoman Camelry - ACCEPTED

Post by Belfry777 » Sat Apr 07, 2018 2:32 am

He dose not have a face for one...
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Re: Ottoman Camelry - ACCEPTED

Post by godOfKings » Sat Apr 07, 2018 10:02 am

most units dont have a any detailed face with eyes, the thing is that his clothes felt too blunt or something, like plain colour

i added a bracer on hand, and a leather bag hanging on the waist, should i add the bag hanging behind him instead?
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Re: Ottoman Camelry - ACCEPTED

Post by LordOfAles » Sat Apr 07, 2018 10:55 am

He is good as he is now
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Re: Ottoman Camelry - ACCEPTED

Post by DoomCarrot » Sat Apr 07, 2018 1:07 pm

I think the images are actually really good. Maybe the second one better
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Re: Ottoman Camelry - ACCEPTED

Post by Belfry777 » Sat Apr 07, 2018 9:48 pm

They look good I like the one with the rein.
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Re: Ottoman Camelry - ACCEPTED

Post by Stratego (dev) » Sat Oct 27, 2018 6:42 am

accepted please someone make json for it - thanks!

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