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Re: Valkyrie

Post by Lynx Shafir » Tue Feb 26, 2019 7:03 am

Improved it

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Re: Valkyrie

Post by Alexander82 » Tue Feb 26, 2019 4:15 pm

Might I suggest something?

I believe that you should choose if you want it flying (in that case you need to change her legs' stance) or standing on the ground (in that case the stance is perfect).

Also I would avoid the Yellow lines inside the wings
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Re: Valkyrie

Post by Typhoon » Wed Apr 10, 2019 1:22 pm

Its time to conquer skies
Im not coming. Im impending

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