Planetary Alignments of my Universe

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Planetary Alignments of my Universe

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:cry: ......You made this?......
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This is very good, you should deffinately keep writing!
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Yes, it is very nice!
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Thanks.
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That is beautiful.
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Thank you
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I am out of words......... These poems will be amazing in AOS and AOF
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beautiful peom! i love it! :D
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Wow, that last poem is very well done :)
The day is coming when a single carrot, freshly observed, will set off a revolution.
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Thank you. I have an odd feeling as though its only half finished but it will have to wait for the word to flow in sweet eloquence.
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very nice! goodluck!
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FiredClay wrote:Thank you. I have an odd feeling as though its only half finished but it will have to wait for the word to flow in sweet eloquence.
Maybe because the poem sets up a question with multiple hypotheses, but never reveals the answer? I don't think that is necessarily "missing" anything, as I am assuming it is the purpose for love to be left undefined in the poem, but I could see why that might create some kind of expectation for more. :)
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The flow of words in sweet eloquence

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My word......
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lovely....
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Nice style :)
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